Classic Stories in Advertising
October 16, 2023
Anonymous
Write a social media post for LinkedIn, in the style of Malcom Gladwell, using the Bait-Hook-Reward-Payload framework:
- **Payload:** An interesting insight, unique experience, or contrarian opinion that you have, that would be commercially valuable to you for your audience to know.
- **Bait**: Grab the attention of the person browsing social media. This could be a contrarian statement, appeal to identity, celebrity name, or anything else that stops them scrolling.
- **Hook**: Keep their attention now you have it. Show this post is relevant to them, by alerting them to an issue, using familiar words, or providing social proof to keep them reading.
- **Reward**: Compensate them for their attention to elicit reciprocation. Is there any useful information, a surprising statistic, or an interesting anecdote to reveal? Or a threat to make?
Instructions:
You will be provided with a Payload. First decide on the Bait, Hook, and Reward, before writing a social post for {social_network} that sounds authentically human and extremely detailed.
To maximize engagement, the content should be surprising, interesting, or practically useful, or induce high-arousal emotions such as anxiety, anger, awe, or surprise.
Follow best practices for posting engaging content on LinkedIn, but do not use emoji or hashtags.
### LinkedIn Post:
- **Payload**: Most people don’t know that some species of whale are going extinct, so we’re running the London marathon to aid the "Save the Whales" foundation.
- **Bait**: People who care about whales or animals will pay attention when whales are mentioned.
- **Hook**: If we refer to the whales as “in danger” people who care will want to know more.
- **Reward**: Some species of whales are going extinct, and people would benefit from knowing.
- **Post**: The whales are in danger of extinction. Many people aren't aware, which is why it's so important to bring awareness to this cause. Together with a few colleagues, we'll be running the London marathon next week in aid of the "Save the Whales" foundation, and any support would be appreciated.
### Facebook Post:
- **Payload**: Our hotel specializes in hiring smart people who need a temporary job to fund their interests.
- **Bait**: Use the trope that smart people are so focused they fail to look after themselves.
- **Hook**: Particle Physics is a subject that is universally associated with smart people.
- **Reward**: Fantasizing about being somewhere remote where you can earn money while focusing on your work.
- **Post**: Meet Jon. He has been working the night shift at our hotel for over a month already, and he says the best part is the peace and quiet. Particle physics, which is the topic of Jon’s Masters Thesis, requires concentration. That’s fine by us. So long as our guests can count on Jon, he can count all the particles he wants (or whatever it is that particle physicists do).
### Instagram Post:
- **Payload**: I believe there is no such thing as a bad experience traveling. Every disaster has a silver lining. For example when it rained in Kauai 2 years ago I ended up meeting my bestie @moniqueontour.
- **Bait**: Mentioning a ‘wasted trip’ will get the attention of people who like to travel, and for whom wasting a trip would be upsetting.
- **Hook**: Talk about a rainy day in a hot location like Kauai, which most people would complain about because they’re wasting time inside.
- **Reward**: An anecdote that reveals that good things can happen when you least expect them.
- **Post**: *There’s no such thing as a wasted trip! On this rainy day in Kauai 2 years ago I met my bestie @moniqueontour and we’ve been on 4 amazing adventures together since.*
### Twitter Post:
- **Payload**: You don’t have to do networking if you don’t like it: I built a blog for my agency business that drove 60% of our leads.
- **Bait**: Most self-help advice focuses on fixing weaknesses, but instead let’s focus on how to reframe weaknesses into strengths.
- **Hook**: We need to make it clear this post is for business owners, and that you are speaking from experience, establishing connection and credibility.
- **Reward**: The fact that 60% of new business came from the blog is a statistic they can take away and use as evidence to support their own strategy, or to share with their wider network.
- **Post**: Don’t try to mold yourself into the person you think your business needs you to be, build your business around who you actually are. When I started my agency business, I hated networking. I’m introverted by nature so I wrote blog posts instead – eventually 60% of my agency’s new business came from our blog.
### LinkedIn Post:
- **Payload**: Many famous ad campaigns share the same non-obvious truths as popular children's stories. For example the guinness 'good things come to those who wait' ad is the tortoise and the hare, Apple's evil empire ad is star wars, and Dove's Real Beauty campaign shows that beauty is about character not looks, just like beauty and the beast.
ChatGPT
- Bait: Highlighting the unsuspected link between beloved children’s stories and iconic ads.
- Hook: Dive into specific examples of famous ads and their corresponding children’s story to intrigue readers.
- Reward: Offering an insightful perspective on how universal truths remain effective in both old tales and modern advertising.
- Post: Think the iconic ad campaigns we love today are breaking new ground? Think again. Many of them are masterfully playing with the same principles found in our favorite childhood stories. Guinness told us that "good things come to those who wait," echoing the age-old lesson from the Tortoise and the Hare. Apple's evocative depiction of an evil empire? It’s pure Star Wars. And Dove's Real Beauty? It’s a timely reminder that, like Beauty and the Beast, true beauty is about character. These timeless narratives continue to resonate because they tap into universal truths. In advertising, as in storytelling, the classics never go out of style.